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broken inside. by ayu-ai broken inside. by ayu-ai
I re-edited another photo, this version is way better :heart:

Her feelings she hides.
Her dreams she can't find.
She's losing her mind.
She's fallen behind.
She can't find her place.
She's losing her faith.
She's fallen from grace.
She's all over the place.



I also changed the tittle, from 'my baby shot me down'. People associated it with a murder scene, which this photo definitely doesn't show ; )

model - sara.



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:iconrashiddo:
rashiddo Featured By Owner Feb 22, 2011  Hobbyist Photographer
Nice poem
Shes pretty al the time

:d...

well made:d
and Sara is gorgeous!
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:iconayu-ai:
ayu-ai Featured By Owner Feb 26, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
yeah, unfortunately she is.. :D
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:iconportrait90:
portrait90 Featured By Owner Jan 5, 2011
russian red ?
i luv her
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:iconayu-ai:
ayu-ai Featured By Owner Jan 10, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
not really, but you are right - she is great! : )
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trapped-reflection Featured By Owner Jan 5, 2011
great photo! !
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:iconayu-ai:
ayu-ai Featured By Owner Jan 5, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
thanks! :aww:
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Starfire4 Featured By Owner Jan 3, 2011  Hobbyist Artist
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OMG
I LIKE IT
good work!(y)
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:iconayu-ai:
ayu-ai Featured By Owner Jan 4, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
Glad you like it, thanks :aww:
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:iconravnka:
Ravnka Featured By Owner Jan 3, 2011   Photographer
Amazing :)
That stone looks cold :snowflake:
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:iconayu-ai:
ayu-ai Featured By Owner Jan 3, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
it was taken in August, last year :aww: so it wasn't that cold.
and I'm glad you like it :thanks:
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screenname911 Featured By Owner Jan 3, 2011  Hobbyist Photographer
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ayu-ai Featured By Owner Jan 3, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
:aww:
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pearwood Featured By Owner Jan 3, 2011  Hobbyist Photographer
"Out came the sun"

The itsy bitsy spider climbed up the water spout.
  Down came the rain and washed the spider out.
Out came the sun and dried up all the rain.
  So the itsy bitsy spider climbed up the spout again.


I love the photo, but it's way too serene for the tragic title.

Steve :)
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:iconayu-ai:
ayu-ai Featured By Owner Jan 3, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
Well, I had no intention to make this photo look like a murder scene or anything like this. I just love this song from Kill Bill and that was first association that came to my mind : )
But maybe you are right, I should think of something different and more suitable.
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:iconpearwood:
pearwood Featured By Owner Jan 3, 2011  Hobbyist Photographer
:hug:
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:iconayu-ai:
ayu-ai Featured By Owner Jan 3, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
I did it, I also added something in a commentary : )
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:iconpearwood:
pearwood Featured By Owner Jan 3, 2011  Hobbyist Photographer
Yes, it has a fallen-angel feel to it.
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kerio13 Featured By Owner Jan 3, 2011  Hobbyist Photographer
zmieniłaś aparat?
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:iconayu-ai:
ayu-ai Featured By Owner Jan 3, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
Nie, to akurat było wykonane aparatem Sary. Jak idziemy razem na zdjęcia to używamy jej, bo jednak Soniacze to się chowają przy Nikonach :P
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:iconpearwood:
pearwood Featured By Owner Aug 9, 2010  Hobbyist Photographer
Or maybe it was just time to rest. She looks so peaceful.
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The-Killers-Romance Featured By Owner Aug 9, 2010
Breathtaking.
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